“I can’t do this anymore.” Martha wiped the tears from her cheeks. “I won’t cry my heart out, waiting for you at night, anymore.” She rolled his body into the river. “Never again.”
This 33 word flash fiction story (with an idiom) was written for Trifecta: Trifextra Week 61. Check out some of the other entries and leave some comment love.
Happy Writing and Photo Fun!
Becca♥
A lovely twist. 🙂
Thanks!
Love it!
Thank you.
Loved the body rolling…
Thanks. Seemed easier than dragging it somewhere… 🙂
Nice. Love a little murder in 33 words.
Thanks. It always surprises me what I can fit into a micro piece. You never know until you try. 😉
Love the twist. I guess you could say it all ended with a splash! Nice one.
Haha. Yes! I like that.
Not what I was expecting…I hope she used the muscles in her legs, not her back, when she rolled him into the river 🙂
I think she just kinda kicked him into it. 😉
Hahahahaha!!! Safety first!!!
Always!
Wonderful! Love the twist. Roll…roll…roll
Lol. Thanks!
That’ll learn him! Love the twist at the end – great little story!
Thanks!
well my dear, that’s one way to settle it.
I really liked it, crying your heart out is just not worth it sometimes. 🙂
Thanks!! I agree.
oh, dear (snicker). Like this! Rollin’ rollin’ rollin’ getcher body rollin’ heh
Ha!
Now that is taking care of business! Love it.
Yes, I don’t think she’ll be waiting on him anymore… 🙂
For all that crying she didn’t seem to mind a little murdering (:
You can only push her so far before she kicks back. 😉
Yes! I love killing people! (IN FICTION)
Ha! I would hope it’s only in fiction…
ooer so didn’t see that coming at all – well done Bec 🙂
Thanks! Glad you liked it. 🙂
Well, no. You don’t have to do that if he’s in the river, now do you? 🙂
Nope.
There’s been a few in my lifetime that I wouldn’t have minded “rollin’ on the river!”
That probably applies to all of us!!
That’s one way of dealing with them!
For sure’
I guess she just got all fed up. Nice little twist which is hard to do in 33 words.
Thanks!
Yep. Never again sounds about right.
Yup. Thanks for stopping by. 🙂
He could have worn cement shoes and fed the fishes.
Nicely,
JzB
Now, he’s sleeping with the fishes. 🙂
That’s awesome!
Thanks.
Emotion and action nicely crafted in.
Thank you.
Always better to roll than to lift. Lifting can play havoc with your back.
Nice one.
Thanks!
Oh my god! You totally caught me by surprise! Whoa, I did not see that coming. A 33 word suspense thriller? Really? Mission accomplished…
Thank you! I love it when I can get that shock on there with just 33 words!
Yay!I like the way she found a beautiful solution:-)
Beautiful, depending on how you look at it I guess. 😉
Much better than crying over the cad,lol!
Yes, much!
🙂
roll him into the river. That’s a new one on me. lol Nice twisty 33!
Thanks!!
A superb twist. Nice one, Becca!
Thank you so much!
Neat twist. That bridge looks familiar…:-)
Are you in WV?
No, I’m in the suburbs of NY. It reminded me of a nearby bridge – The Tappan Zee. 🙂
Oh. Okay. Lol.
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