What Would Happen…

sparkling8A stranger’s green eyes glanced in my direction. I pressed the elevator button, diamond-encrusted wedding set throwing sparks. After depressing another button, his hand brushed mine.

Then, my tongue slipped past his lips.

This 33 word flash fiction was written for Trifextra Week 65: use a hyphenated compound modifier.

Inspired by “What Would Happen” by Meredith Brooks.

21 Replies to “What Would Happen…”

  1. The Real Cie says:

    Reblogged this on The Cheese Whines and commented:
    So well written. And yet, the despair of infidelity. Love–a game I gave up on long ago.

  2. Ann Bennett says:

    Well the heck with introducing yourself, just get busy.

  3. Lumdog says:

    This is a very hot story. I wish you had another 33 words! ๐Ÿ™‚

  4. Suzanne says:

    Goodness! Is it hot in here or what? Love your choice of compound modifier!

  5. atrm61 says:

    Wowza!She does work fast & how!Great use of the prompt:-)

  6. Draug419 says:

    Well, that didn’t take much convincing… ๐Ÿ˜‰

  7. jannatwrites says:

    Um…wow! Thank goodness I don’t make eye contact with strangers in elevators ๐Ÿ™‚

  8. Tracie says:

    I am going to have to watch out for strangers in elevators!

  9. Brian Benoit says:

    Ha, whew! Look out I guess, haha. Loved the line about the diamonds throwing sparks (and the totally unexpected follow up). Nice

  10. Very good. I would have enjoyed reading the entire story, but I can imagine!
    I missed the linking limit on the post.
    Mine is at https://kindredspirit23.wordpress.com
    Scott

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