Opening

This package is an evaluation of the first three chapters of your book, up to 50 pages or 12,500 words. I will check your opening for the introduction of your main characters, story problem, and story goal. I will also evaluate your writing for setting, description, dialogue, conflict, pacing, genre promises, and show versus tell.

You will receive an editorial letter (email) outlining 2-3 big picture issues, along with suggestions for addressing them. You can then choose a one-hour Zoom meeting or 1-2 email conversations to discuss your letter and any questions you may have.

The cost of this package is $500 USD.

Ready to Work?

Contact me to set up a meeting or email exchange to see if we are a good fit to work together and which package/service will meet your needs.